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The City of the Hand ([personal profile] cityofthehand) wrote 2012-04-27 01:11 am (UTC)

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm really glad that you like the first chapter. And thank you for the critiques as well.

Infodumping is kind of something I need to work on as a writer and future works will definitely take this into mind!
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